Dredlynn's poetry
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They Control Me
They Control Me
Now I understand
That no one’s there for me
No one loves me
No one cares about me
When we would talk
And I would open up to them
All I got in return
Were fake emotions
And worthless pity
They never cared
They just wanted to build me up
So they could knock me down
And every time they rebuilt me
I could feel they’re true feelings
And hear what they really think of me
One day I will break free
One day I will find my place
One day I will kill the pain
I feel so weak
I can feel myself slipping
The pressure is taking its toll
And I don’t know
If I’ll ever make it out of here alive
I don’t know
If I have the voice to tell my story
They are controlling me
My every thought
Is theirs
My every dream
They made me dream
Now I feel the poison flowing in my veins
My time is up
But thru this
I will live forever.
Now I understand
That no one’s there for me
No one loves me
No one cares about me
When we would talk
And I would open up to them
All I got in return
Were fake emotions
And worthless pity
They never cared
They just wanted to build me up
So they could knock me down
And every time they rebuilt me
I could feel they’re true feelings
And hear what they really think of me
One day I will break free
One day I will find my place
One day I will kill the pain
I feel so weak
I can feel myself slipping
The pressure is taking its toll
And I don’t know
If I’ll ever make it out of here alive
I don’t know
If I have the voice to tell my story
They are controlling me
My every thought
Is theirs
My every dream
They made me dream
Now I feel the poison flowing in my veins
My time is up
But thru this
I will live forever.
Dredlynn- Waking Up
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Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-03-28
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Broken Heart
Broken Heart
Holding on the moment
Holding on to the love
Holding you high
Stealing your pain
Catching your tears
Keeping you safe
The love we have
Is rare
Living, breathing
Just for you
You keep me alive
And I can’t lose you
I can’t be without you
You complete me
You picture is fading
But our love will never
I love your eyes
I love your smile
I love your laugh
I love you
And I know that I will
Never leave
I hold you close
And it pains me
To see you suffer.
Holding on the moment
Holding on to the love
Holding you high
Stealing your pain
Catching your tears
Keeping you safe
The love we have
Is rare
Living, breathing
Just for you
You keep me alive
And I can’t lose you
I can’t be without you
You complete me
You picture is fading
But our love will never
I love your eyes
I love your smile
I love your laugh
I love you
And I know that I will
Never leave
I hold you close
And it pains me
To see you suffer.
Dredlynn- Waking Up
- Number of posts : 45
Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-03-28
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Money: $10
Weapon #1: Sniper Rifle
Weapon #2: Two .22 pistols
The Dinner Table
The Dinner Table
Sitting at the dinner table
Looking at the one despise
The one I want to kill
Then he looked up from the table
Where his eyes had been intently staring
“So. How was your day, dear,” he asks,
“You seem stressed,
Was it a bad day?”
And I simply replied,
“It was just one of those days.”
And silence fell upon the room yet again
He begins to sip from his glass of red wine
He has no idea of my plan
My plan to get rid of him
He has no idea of the poison I put in his wine
As he begins to sit his glass down
I curiously ask, “How was dinner?”
“It was fine,” he replies,
“The wine tastes a little funny though.”
With a tired look in his eyes
He prepares to head off to bed
“Are you going to bed?” I ask
“Yes,” he answers,
“Are you coming?”
“I’ll be up in a bit,” I reply
He leaves the room
And I begin to laugh uncontrollably
Because this shall be his final sleep
For when morning comes
He will be dead
And my plan a success
“Good night my love,” I said out loud,
“Good night forever.”
Sitting at the dinner table
Looking at the one despise
The one I want to kill
Then he looked up from the table
Where his eyes had been intently staring
“So. How was your day, dear,” he asks,
“You seem stressed,
Was it a bad day?”
And I simply replied,
“It was just one of those days.”
And silence fell upon the room yet again
He begins to sip from his glass of red wine
He has no idea of my plan
My plan to get rid of him
He has no idea of the poison I put in his wine
As he begins to sit his glass down
I curiously ask, “How was dinner?”
“It was fine,” he replies,
“The wine tastes a little funny though.”
With a tired look in his eyes
He prepares to head off to bed
“Are you going to bed?” I ask
“Yes,” he answers,
“Are you coming?”
“I’ll be up in a bit,” I reply
He leaves the room
And I begin to laugh uncontrollably
Because this shall be his final sleep
For when morning comes
He will be dead
And my plan a success
“Good night my love,” I said out loud,
“Good night forever.”
Dredlynn- Waking Up
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Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-03-28
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Weapon #1: Sniper Rifle
Weapon #2: Two .22 pistols
Be There
Be There
I want to be there when you call,
To catch every tear as they fall.
I pray that we will never part,
For you have my heart.
I pray I am near,
When you face your greatest fear.
No more tears tonight,
It is time you took flight.
The church bell rings,
As you spread your wings.
And flying away with such grace,
Tears stream down my face.
You were always there,
With your love and care.
And I pray that we will never part,
For you have my heart.
I want to be there when you call,
To catch every tear as they fall.
I pray that we will never part,
For you have my heart.
I pray I am near,
When you face your greatest fear.
No more tears tonight,
It is time you took flight.
The church bell rings,
As you spread your wings.
And flying away with such grace,
Tears stream down my face.
You were always there,
With your love and care.
And I pray that we will never part,
For you have my heart.
Dredlynn- Waking Up
- Number of posts : 45
Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-03-28
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Money: $10
Weapon #1: Sniper Rifle
Weapon #2: Two .22 pistols
Feed My Artistic Needs
Feed My Artistic Needs
When nothing else exists it becomes real:
Drinking the Jonestown Tea for a new life,
Still searching for away to make you feel
But only seeing the edge of a knife;
Trying to feed my artistic need
Feeling the freedom in the way I write
All you need to know is people have believed.
Making you see it’s time for us to fight:
In the words you say and write as real
Making light out of the darkest time for them
The leader of the dead, which you must kneel,
The time has come for us to be a femme,
They see you as the leader of the dead,
And not afraid of anything red.
When nothing else exists it becomes real:
Drinking the Jonestown Tea for a new life,
Still searching for away to make you feel
But only seeing the edge of a knife;
Trying to feed my artistic need
Feeling the freedom in the way I write
All you need to know is people have believed.
Making you see it’s time for us to fight:
In the words you say and write as real
Making light out of the darkest time for them
The leader of the dead, which you must kneel,
The time has come for us to be a femme,
They see you as the leader of the dead,
And not afraid of anything red.
Dredlynn- Waking Up
- Number of posts : 45
Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-03-28
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Money: $10
Weapon #1: Sniper Rifle
Weapon #2: Two .22 pistols
Re: Dredlynn's poetry
Star Gazer
Lying in the grass
Of my backyard
Looking up
And gazing
At the stars
Thinking about
How beautiful
This really is
Trying to find
The big dipper
When I saw
A shooting star
I made a wish
And I hope
It will come true
Looking up
And gazing at the stars
Seeing how beautiful
They really are.
Lying in the grass
Of my backyard
Looking up
And gazing
At the stars
Thinking about
How beautiful
This really is
Trying to find
The big dipper
When I saw
A shooting star
I made a wish
And I hope
It will come true
Looking up
And gazing at the stars
Seeing how beautiful
They really are.
Dredlynn- Waking Up
- Number of posts : 45
Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-03-28
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Money: $10
Weapon #1: Sniper Rifle
Weapon #2: Two .22 pistols
just one second away
just one second away
just one second away from freedom
the knife is at my wrist
and i can't think of any new reasons
why do i remain here
why am i still alive
i should have died
years ago
i never ment to live this long
i'm a waste of time
space
and engery
with one twist of the knife
and it will be all over
never again will you see this face
never again will you hear this voice
the bathroom floor feels so cold
against my flesh
lying in a pool of my own blood
and as i close my eyes for one last time
i see you
i see your face
stained with the tears you have cried
and i begin to regret
what i have done
i wish there was away
to take this all back
all of a sudden
this world doesn't seem so dark
evil
and full of pain and hurt
but the blood i have spilled tonight
can not be taken back
so to save myself
from what i thot
was pain
hurt
and deception
i'm just going to run
run as fast as i can
towards that light
and hope to find peace
because
i'm just one second away from freedom
and there's nothing anybody can do about it
so i guess this is
good bye
GOOD BYE FOREVER.
just one second away from freedom
the knife is at my wrist
and i can't think of any new reasons
why do i remain here
why am i still alive
i should have died
years ago
i never ment to live this long
i'm a waste of time
space
and engery
with one twist of the knife
and it will be all over
never again will you see this face
never again will you hear this voice
the bathroom floor feels so cold
against my flesh
lying in a pool of my own blood
and as i close my eyes for one last time
i see you
i see your face
stained with the tears you have cried
and i begin to regret
what i have done
i wish there was away
to take this all back
all of a sudden
this world doesn't seem so dark
evil
and full of pain and hurt
but the blood i have spilled tonight
can not be taken back
so to save myself
from what i thot
was pain
hurt
and deception
i'm just going to run
run as fast as i can
towards that light
and hope to find peace
because
i'm just one second away from freedom
and there's nothing anybody can do about it
so i guess this is
good bye
GOOD BYE FOREVER.
Dredlynn- Waking Up
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Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-03-28
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Weapon #2: Two .22 pistols
Irish Curse
For all those that have doubted us.
All those that have done us wrong,
Pay for the pain they have caused.
Leave them brused and broken,
Praying for freedom.
All those that have done us wrong,
Pay for the pain they have caused.
Leave them brused and broken,
Praying for freedom.
Dredlynn- Waking Up
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Age : 35
Registration date : 2008-03-28
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Re: Dredlynn's poetry
sounds liek an real irish:D
hedgehog- Exploited
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Re: Dredlynn's poetry
not really much people on this site but this song cheered me up so i guess it wasnt for nothing
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Re: Dredlynn's poetry
@Hedgehog: Well we're trying to get more people; we have members : but they don't come around anymore. I don't know why. If you know people; etc.. tell me !
@ Dredlynn: Very beautiful; inspiring piece !
@ Dredlynn: Very beautiful; inspiring piece !
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Re: Dredlynn's poetry
In my point of view, everybody paid for they freedom; and struggled to keep it. And no people is better than the other ! Everybody's equal, but since humans are not perfect, well, they invented the biggest mistake of all : society!
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Dredlynn's poetry
I merged them in one topic; to save space. I find it's easier to find a specific piece of work that way !
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The Bastard
I told you I was pathetic
Now didn’t I
Seeing me in a whole different light
Makes you realize I was right
Every negative thing I’ve said
Seems so true in the end
So I just stand here
With my finger on the trigger
Waiting for the right moment
To set fire
To these deceitful desires
Never thought I would turn out like this
A selfish bastard bent on making every bodies life
A living hell
But then again I’m trapped in this cell
No other place to go
No soul to sell
Falling into the dark places in my mind
Finding comfort in these lies
I am that bastard you created
Now sit down and listen
Just look into my eyes
And realize
This bastard
Ain’t going down
Without a fight.
I told you I was pathetic
Now didn’t I
Seeing me in a whole different light
Makes you realize I was right
Every negative thing I’ve said
Seems so true in the end
So I just stand here
With my finger on the trigger
Waiting for the right moment
To set fire
To these deceitful desires
Never thought I would turn out like this
A selfish bastard bent on making every bodies life
A living hell
But then again I’m trapped in this cell
No other place to go
No soul to sell
Falling into the dark places in my mind
Finding comfort in these lies
I am that bastard you created
Now sit down and listen
Just look into my eyes
And realize
This bastard
Ain’t going down
Without a fight.
Dredlynn- Waking Up
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Age : 35
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Re: Dredlynn's poetry
I like how you write.
Daleka- Creator
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Re: Dredlynn's poetry
thank you
i try to be different i dont like to be like every body else
and i love your poetry
i try to be different i dont like to be like every body else
and i love your poetry
Dredlynn- Waking Up
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