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the on going poem

Post  Dredlynn on Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:28 pm

for those that dont now what im talking about i'll write some poetry and the next person to read has to at something to it that goes along with what the person before them wrote.



lying back and looking up at the stars
thinking of you and the memories i have
hoping that i turned out the way you wanted
that you look down upon me
and see your baby-girl
i hope you are proud of i have become.....
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Post  Daleka on Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:34 pm

Becoming nothing as the sun quietly dies down
Landing in a sea of emptiness
Your silhouette shining in the dark light
The blade of betrayal sinking in my back
As you look down at me a smirk

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Post  Dredlynn on Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:43 pm

your eyes full of anger
i can see the hate in you eyes
i can see my pain gives you power
my tears feed your fire
the rage is building up inside
im not going to let you do this to me
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Post  Daleka on Tue Apr 22, 2008 12:56 pm

Carving strange symbols into the skin of my back
Yelling coming out mute as the shower turns cold
Cold like my heart; cold like your eyes on me
Smile turns to grin... are you happy now?

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Post  Dredlynn on Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:01 pm

i slowly sink the floor
the last image i see is you smiling
smiling with joy over hurting me
over seeing me cry
i never thot you would do this to me
i thot i could trust you
i thot i could believe you
but i guess i was wrong
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Post  Dredlynn on Wed Apr 30, 2008 2:11 pm

you seem to think you can control me
tell what to do
push me around
well im done with you
i want nothing to do you with you anymore
you're nothing but a worthless memory to me..........
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