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Post  Dredlynn on Wed May 14, 2008 9:41 am




The Beach

With a heavy heart I looked into her eyes,

Seeing her smile as my soul dies.

My heart beats faster as I take her hand,

This isnít as easy as I had planed.

My heart yearns to immerse in your embrace,

To strive for love that never I will reach.

I follow her footsteps to the ocean,

While I remain alone here on the beach.





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Post  Daleka on Wed May 14, 2008 12:50 pm

I like your poem a lot !

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Post  Dredlynn on Wed May 14, 2008 1:09 pm

i had to write for class
and poetry is my strong point but lately i havent been able to write so i was surprized when i wrote this.ok i didnt write it all i had some help but i wrote half of it.
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Post  Daleka on Wed May 14, 2008 1:24 pm

Very Happy well don't forget that you have your thread for your poetry !

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Post  Dredlynn on Wed May 14, 2008 1:27 pm

my bad i forgot about it
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