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i need help on this english paper

Post  Dredlynn on Tue May 13, 2008 12:19 pm

i need four more lines to this poem i have to write for english. its an iambic pentamiter (spelled wrong i know). it needs to be 8-10 lines, 10 syllables per line and and i cant think of anything else. my poems about a me having trouble saying i love you to this other girl. so if you can help me out and if you cant please give me some ideas to help me figure out what to write. thank you all so much.


With a heavy heart I looked into her eyes,

Seeing her smile as my soul dies.

My heart beats faster as I take her hand,
This isnít as easy as I had planed.
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Re: i need help on this english paper

Post  Bones on Tue May 13, 2008 6:36 pm

Hmm...I suck at complicated poems. Try using the wonder of google. Maybe if you told me what you were trying for more specifically, I could help.

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